Welcome to Snippet Sunday. This is another snippet from Magic of the Loch. Today’s snippet is a couple of sentences later from last week.
If you missed last weeks snippet, here’s the link: Chapter 5 #11
The Wild Rose Press
Kindle
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Set up: Alan steps forward in hopes of defusing the situation. Will Ethan comply?
***Note: Snippet has been modified to fit the 8 sentence limit. Fancy punctuations to make this one work and few lines eliminated. lol 
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“That’s enough, Ethan MacGregor,” Alan demanded and silence hit the room at once with all eyes riveted to Ethan and the MacLachlin brothers, the air thick with anticipation.
Ethan’s gaze riveted on Alan again, his mouth opening with what looked like a nasty retort, but then his lips smoothed and pressed together into a fine line.
“We’ll talk, but no’ here where others can be hurt,” Alan said, his smooth voice washing over Ethan like a wave.
Michaela glanced around the room, wondering if anyone caught how Alan calmed Ethan, his voice like the low hum of a melody. Could he hypnotize people and animals with his voice? She couldn’t dismiss how earlier today he had demanded his German Shepherd to stop harassing the cat; and on the boat, he had touched her temples and his unusual blue eyes locked with hers as he spoke. Her pain eased and disappeared without her having to take the meds she had stashed in her backpack. It was as if the sound of his voice hypnotized them all into compliance.
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Alan has a magical voice. Can you just imagine how it sounds? 🙂
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Weekend Writing Warriors for Eight Sentence Sunday
Karen, I can definitely imagine Ethan’s voice from your description. Love the cover!
Nancy,
Thanks so much. I love the cover, too! The talented Rae Monet created it.
That’s an interesting thought and a wonderful gift! Beautifully described snippet as always!
Gemma,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet. 🙂
I wish I could do that, especially with my kids. . . 🙂
Sarah,
Wouldn’t that be a wonderful trick. lol
Great snippet! Sounds like he’s a healer. He’s intriguing and the snippet made me want to know more.
Jean,
So glad you’re intrigued. 🙂
Exceptional eight. You do a fine job drawing the reader in with description and dialogue. Thanks.
Charmaine,
Thank you so much for the lovely compliment. 🙂
This snippet makes me want to purr… Well done!
P.T.,
Purr away. lol
I loved this book. Thanks for taking me down memory lane. 🙂 Alan. Sigh.
Karysa,
Thank you! I’m thrilled you loved the story. 🙂
Alan is such an interesting character! I really like his ability to soothe and heal, and I want to get to know him better. Good excerpt.
Sandra,
Thank you. I’m glad you would like to know Alan better. He would be great to have around, wouldn’t he? 🙂
I love that Michaela is so sharp and observant. Terrific excerpt!
Veronica,
I do love a smart and capable heroine, too. 🙂
His voice sounds amazing! Would love to hear him speak. He can probably work magic with it. 🙂
Dianne,
I’m sure he can. lol 🙂
Oh…better she realizes that! I’d want to know if I was spending time with someone with that ability. Intriguing 8, Karen! 🙂
Teresa,
Yes, it would. 🙂
I wish I could do that
Elaine,
Yes it would be a wonderful ability.
Wonderful snippet and fantastic cover!
V.L.,
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the snippet. Rae Monet did the lovely cover. I love it, too!!
A silver tongue is a very valuable gift.
Carrie-Anne,
It sure is!!
Wonderful snippet and has me wondering exactly who Alan is.
Lindsay,
Thank you. So glad you’re intrigued. 🙂
Terrific excerpt. I’d want to listen to his voice.
Diane,
He does have a lovely voice. 🙂
At lest he’s shut Ethan up for the moment.
Sue Ann,
Just for the moment. lol
Wonderful snippet.
Sherry,
Thank you!
I like that some pieces of info are falling into place for her! Nice job of conveying her little “ah ha” moment.
Yeah! Michaela finally starts noticing that everything is not what it seems, nice.