Welcome to Snippet Sunday. This is a snippet from Soul Taker.
If you missed the last weeks snippet, here’s the link. :): Chapter 1 #4
Set up:
Garran MacLaurin has returned to Boston to govern the territory of Otherworldy beings and he expects his rules to be obeyed.
Sanya is still trying to figure a way out of the mess she’s created, but she’s not having much luck.
This snippet takes place a few paragraphs later from last week’s snippet. This snippet has been modified.
***Note: The snippet has been modified to fit the 8 sentence limit. Warning: There may be some fancy punctuations and long sentences.
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He watched over his territory and protected the food source instead of indulging in it. Why couldn’t one of the vampires, who partook in sampling humans now and again, be in charge? Even a demon ruler would be better than MacLaurin.
MacLaurin’s large hand cupped her face, his gaze sliding over her slowly as if memorizing each of her features. She hated to plead, but she didn’t want to go out like this and said, “Please, Garran, you’re one of us.”
“One of us? How charmin’,” he said as his eyebrows rose in mock pretense.
“Sure, you’re a vampire even if you were infected with—”
He put a finger over her lips, silencing her, and she struggled to be free even as his grip tightened.
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Oh Sanya, you should learn to keep quiet. lol
Stop by next week for snippet #6 from my Urban Fantasy tale, SOUL TAKER.
If you’re interested in knowing more about SOUL TAKER, here’s a blurb:
No soul is safe…
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Fascinating and slightly scary snippet. Great writing. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks Heather. Glad the snippet gave you the chills. 🙂
Ok. grrrr…Have to know more. Am buying this now. (Snippet sold me).
Gem,
I’m so thrilled you want more! Hope you enjoy the tale! Thank you so much!
Your imagination boggles my mind. What a complex tale you’re telling and I’m involved in the story week after eek. Thanks.
Charmaine,
Thank you for the lovely compliment. 🙂
Dramatic. Exciting. Full of vampires. And I like the title Soul Taker.
Nissa,
Thank you. I’m glad you like the title, too.
May as well say what you’re thinking if there’s nothing to lose. Great snippet.
Ed,
So very true. lol
Oh, she’s picking all the wrong things to say. Great snippet, Karen. 🙂
Oh, intriguing snippet and Garren sounds deliciously dangerous. Great snippet!
Loren,
So glad you’re liking Garran. 🙂
I shouldn’t love Sonya’s attitude, but I totally do. 😀
And I’m going to enjoy watching Garren fix her outlook!
Sarah,
I’m glad you like Sanya.
Leaves me wondering what’s gonna happen next…yikes. I’m nervous for her.
Great tension!!
Angela,
Thank you. 🙂
Sounds like her pleading isn’t working, but on the other hand it doesn’t sound like she’s about to be killed out of hand or surely that would have happened by now?
Botanist,
You are very astute. 🙂
Well that’s a fascinating conversation, ended far too soon LOL! Terrific excerpt, definitely leaves me wanting more.
Veronica,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet.
Ohh, ~shudder~ What tension. He doesn’t sound like the type you want to cross.
Sarah,
No, he’s not. 🙂
Your characters are great. And the predicament she’s in during this snippet it packed with tension. 🙂 Great job pulling the reader in, Karen! 🙂
Wonder what use he has for her.
Sue Ann,
Oh, you’ll soon see.
Nice work… the danger is palpable and the dialogue sings.
Jeff,
Thank you so much. 🙂
Oh, she has gotten herself into a pickle. Great writing when you toss in seeming insurmountable obstacles in the MC’s way. Well done.
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Cindy,
She is in a pickle, but she’s also a wily gal. She’ll think of something to save herself. 🙂
MacLaurin is definitely not fun. I started it last night by the way, I love that stake in the heart twist, very powerful.