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“Tim’s my brother and his girl is Sloane McBride.”
Derek’s gaze narrowed onto the vamp with renewed interest. He’d known a Sloane McBride in high school. Thick dark hair, light eyes, kissable lips… His breath hitched at the thought of her, but really, what were the chances that it was the same girl? Crap, he really hoped it wasn’t. He really liked her. He had kissed her… more than a few times. He shifted his weight uncomfortably and focused his attention on Trent’s next words.
“Don’t know if my brother has changed her or not,” Trent rambled on.
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The stakes are high (no pun intended…sort of…). Derek may have to dust his former girlfriend, and it sounds like he really misses those kisses. lol Wonder if he’ll tell his brothers he knows the girl. What do you think? Will he kiss and tell?
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This situation is rife with possibilities that could turn the story in any one of many different directions.
Interesting snippet today.
A cliff hanger here. Will he or won’t he tell. It’s a quandry and I love it.
Hmmm, this should be interesting. Great snippet!
Why do I get the feeling it will be the girl he remembers. No doubt she will bring complications. Can’t wait to read more.
I bet it’s going to be her. It has to be, doesn’t it? 😉
Well, so I choose to believe there’s hope yet for the kissable girl! Excellent excerpt, as Ed says, gives us so many possibilities for where the story can go.
Great snippet! And I’m also willing to put my money on it being Sloane. Just because that would create so many delicious problems. 🙂
Somehow I don’t quite believe that Trent is telling the whole truth…
I love this. It sets you up to go anywhere you want with the story. Me? I’m hoping for mayhem, because one can never have enough mayhem in a story.