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“Your heart is beating fast.”
Her brows drew together as she said, “How do—” She didn’t have a chance to finish her question. He captured her lips and her words were swallowed into a passionate caress. His tongue swept inside her mouth and she met his passion, but something pricked her lip and she drew back in alarm. Her hand flew to her mouth, and when she looked at her fingers, she spotted drops of blood coloring the tips. “You bit me.” Again, she thought the last to herself.
“You say it as if it is a bad, thing.” He stalked toward her, and this time there was no mistake; his eyes gleamed with a weird sheen before turning red.
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Does Tim seem a little pleased to be invited in?
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Ruuuuuuuuun! There it is, too late now, huh? There has to be some way to save her. Some way…
Good snippet, Karen. 🙂
Teresa,
She’s just starting to realize Tim is not the boyfriend she once knew.
You say it as if it were a bad thing …. well it’s not usual… nice snippet. wonder what happens next
Iris,
I’m with you on this. No love bites for me. lol
As Teresa wrote-too late to run. And I say YIKES. She bites the proverbial dust. Regular gal, no more. Terrific snippet.
Charmaine,
Things are never going to be the same.
Eeek! I think she’s finally getting the message that something is wrong. Hopefully it’s not too late.
Christina,
She’s not doomed yet…
Oh, what a terrifying last line! I hope there’s a way out for her, but it doesn’t look good. Fabulous snippet!
Joyce,
Is it terrible to say I’m glad you were terrified. lol
Bit her “again”?
That last line is chilling.
PT,
Yep, this is the second bite. He did a little nibbling the day before. Hmm…could be why she’s not feeling so well.
I’m with him, biting isn’t always a bad thing. 😉 Great snippet.
Jennifer,
lol- I’m a little worried about you.
This poor girl! Of course it’s a bad thing for him to bite her…but excellent excerpt. The way you’re telling this story is all the more fascinating for having some unusual aspects.
Veronica,
So glad you’re enjoying the tale.
Yeah, not the stuff hits the fan. Great snippet, Karen. 🙂
That should’ve said “now.”
It’s hard to see how she can escape him now…but that’s probably what you want us to think.
Ed,
You’ll have to wait and see. 🙂
Oh my! Get the heck outta there now, girl! Nice snippet!
Thank you, Frank.
I’m thinking it’s too late for running. She might need to fight!
Caitlin,
Most likely she will.
Yowza… that’s one intense snippet. The pacing is just right & the prose is dead on. Nice work!
Jeff,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet.
I’m glad she has a dog. She might need all the help she can get to run out of here.
Linda,
Only she put Lad outside.
You say it like it’s a bad thing! Love it! Can’t wait to see what she does next!
Emmy,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet.
Doesn’t she know you never invite someone in who bites? Now he can come back whenever he wants. I’m thinking it may be too late for her, poor girl.
Say it as if it’s a bad thing… Gee, I wonder why it IS a bad thing.
Ruuuuuuun!! Or, well, it’s probably too late to run now.
Daelyn,
You just might be right.
uh oh! Blood red eyes…not a good.