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Wade turned toward Axel who stood leaning on the hilt of his broadsword. It was an ancient weapon belonging to a highlander back in the sixteenth century. Axel kept it in good shape and extra sharp. “He’s all yours,” Wade said as he stepped aside and Axel took his place.
“Hey, you said you’d let me go.” Trent’s voice held a note of panic.
“I said I might consider letting you go,” Wade said with a grin. “I considered…ain’t goin’ to happen.”
Trent’s fangs lengthened as Axel brought down the sword. Trent’s mouth opened in a silent scream before crumbling into dust like his fallen master.
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Derek believes the Tim’s girlfriend, Sloane McBride, could be a girl he once dated in high school. After his brothers showed no mercy with Trent, do you believe they’ll give Sloane a chance?
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Uh oh, poor Trent. Great snippet–like the description of the ancient weapon.
Nancy,
Glad you enjoyed the description.
The brothers are really cold and efficient at their jobs. I guess they have to be. 🙂 Good snippet, Karen!
Yes, they do have to be efficient. They were born into a hunter’s way of life, but things are about to change.
Aw, I kinda felt sorry for Trent at the end there. Poor sucker. 😉
In a vampire context, “poor sucker” seems like a pun. Intentional?
lol- Love your intentional pun.
Joyce,
Don’t feel too sorry for the vamp. He’d think nothing of infecting the next human he came across. Remember, he’s been infected with the most vile of the vampire septs.
Oooo,love this snippet! Always be sure to listen when you’re dealing with supernatural creatures. Great job!
Amy,
Love the supernatural, too. 🙂
Efficient? Without a doubt! A bit harsh. Oh yes. I’m happy to know things are about to change.
Charmaine,
The hunters have to be harsh. It’s all part of their training, but they’ll soon see that not all in black and white.
I guess the vampire heard what he wanted to hear. I’d feel a little sorry for him, except for the fact that he threw his brother under the bus pretty quickly!
Caitlin,
He did give up his brother quickly in hopes of saving himself. lol Now, aren’t you glad it didn’t work?
Trent – another not too smart vampire in this world! Intrigued by the mention of the sword…excellent excerpt.
Interesting snippet! Silent scream ? Well done.
“I considered…ain’t goin’ to happen.” LOL! I love that line. So much sass into it. Great snippet, as always!
Oh hey, I kinda liked Trent. Wonder what his twin will be like… Loving this story!
hahaha I wonder how he ever thought that they might let him go.
Lovely loophole, there!