Welcome to Snippet Sunday.
Enjoy a snippet from last week: Flowers and Fangs, Chapter 4 #7
This week’s snippet is another snippet from Flowers and Fangs- Nominated for best New Adult book RONE Award.
Chapter 4. This is in Derek’s POV.
Quick update from last week: Derek realizes Sloane doesn’t know she’s changing into a vampire.
*The excerpt may have been modified to fit the 10 sentence limit.
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“Please, just leave me alone.”
“Honey, I can’t and if you don’t start answering my questions, I promise, you will not like what I’ll have to do to you.” She tried to look away, but he wouldn’t let her. He grabbed her chin, forcing her to meet his eyes. “Start from the beginning and tell me what led up to your boyfriend giving you one heck of a hickey.”
She jerked out of his grip. “He’s been acting strange.”
“How?”
“I don’t know, like he was high or something, just weird.” Her gaze shifted to him and he would bet he was added to her list of weird.
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Oh man… I don’t want her to be infected. I can’t imagine how this could be a HEA if she’s been bitten.
But then again, you’re pretty skillful at bringing your characters out on the good side of things. 🙂
Teresa,
Thanks so much for the compliment. There just may be a way to make things okay for Sloane, but it may not be what you expect. 🙂
“I’m not weird, it’s the rest of the world.” With everything going crazy, she needs to hang onto believing that she’s still normal, and you showed that need well.
Weird is one very broad term. I hope he’ll get his answers.
Iris,
He may not like the answer. 🙂
I want her to make it….somehow. I’m happy he’s talking first and not shooting or staking. Interesting story, loved the excerpt.
Veronica,
Thanks so much. So glad you’re intrigued.
Man, it sucks for him that he has to be the one to break the news to her. Her confusion rings very true.
Jeff,
So glad her confusion rings true. That’s perfect. Thanks so much.
Yikes! Talk about an edge of your seat conflict. I don’t normally look to read vampire stories, but this is one I am totally interested in. Well done tension.
Yeah, if I was her, everything here would be on my list of weird. Great snippet, Karen. 🙂
Siobhan,
Thanks. It would be on my list of weird too. lol
Weird is certainly an understatement, given what’s happened so far!
Carrie-Anne,
So very true.
I wonder if it’s reversible. She doesn’t seem to be at an advanced stage. Maybe there is a way to stop it, or she won’t like what he’ll do to her whether or not she answer his questions.
No, she won’t like it. Is the process reversible? Probably not.
I don’t think she’s going to like adding to her weird list.
Hmmm… What a horrible situation. Death and dust or become a monster. Hope there’s a third option.
You’ve really made me care about her fate, and I’m glad he’s giving her a chance to talk instead of just staking her. Great snippet!
Really enjoying these snippets…wonder what is going to go down next.
Turning in a vampire … yeah, I can see how she might find that weird.
LOL on that last line! Poor Sloane is still so confused. I wonder how he’s going to break this news to her.
Daelyn,
You have to feel sorry for her.