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Enjoy the previous snippet of Flowers and Fangs, Chapter 5 #2
Chapter 5. This is in Sloane’s POV.
Quick update from last week: Sloane made an attempt to flee from Derek, but he caught her. If things couldn’t get any worse, Derek’s brothers have arrived on the scene and are looking for Derek. Only Derek doesn’t seem too keen on alerting them to where he is.
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Derek murmured something under his breath, a curse she would imagine, but she didn’t have time to think about it as he managed to drag her to her feet and usher her behind the shed with his body pressed against hers, in a manner that would be deemed inappropriate. “Don’t even try to call out,” he warned her.
She rolled her eyes at him. It was a little difficult to call out with his hand clamped over her mouth, but he didn’t seem to notice.
“That’s Axel, my brother,” he said and gestured toward the back door. “You don’t want to draw his attention. Whatever you’re thinking about me, he’s ten times worse. He reacts before he takes in the whole situation, and believe me little lady, you’ll be toast.”
She didn’t understand any of this–Tim’s attack and… Derek, the boy whose kisses made her toes curl–what was he doing here? Did he remember her?
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Wait until Sloane finds out Derek does remember her. Wonder what she’ll think then? Will she trust him? Think him crazy?
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Wow, that doesn’t seem very friendly. Something is about to happen, I think.
Hmmm, not the best situation for her to be in. But I think Derek has her best interests at heart… I hope?
I hope she realizes now that he’s trying to protect her. Great snippet. (I love that his kisses made her toes curl, and wondered what happened that they didn’t stay together.)
Ya she might want to calm down. Axel sounds rough.
You have many different layers of action going on here, and they’re all working!
Scary situation! I hope she finds a way out.
I know he’s protecting her, but I think he’s probably enjoying that body-pressing stuff! 😉
So she does know him. Oh good, that’ll make this harder. 😀 Great snippet, Karen. 🙂
Her situation is getting more and more terrifying!
Hmm, she’s clearly not overly concerned about Derek. I sense she should heed his advice about Axel, though. 🙁
Ok – situation is getting worse. But i wonder whether she realises now that he’s protecting her.
I love the subtle underlying sexual tension, Karen. I guess she is going to have to trust him!
Poor Sloane is justifiably confused at this point! I like that Derek is taking care of her in his own fashion. Can’t wait to find out what’s next!
Very well done. I could literally hear the harsh whisper of his warning.
I get the distinct feeling something is going to go wrong yet with Axel. Love the description of him pressing his body against hers in what would be deemed inappropriate. Great snippet.