Hello Sunday Readers!
Gillian’s Book Covers, “Judge Your Book By Its Cover”: We added more pre-made book covers at Judge Your Book By Its Cover website. So if anyone is in need of book cover for their next best seller, you know where to browse. ๐
Books: I finished Clockwork Princess by Cassandra Clare.ย Really good, and I think fans of the series will be pleased with the ending.ย I’m still reading The Invasion of Falgannon Isle by Deborah MacGillivray. It’s a cute story set in Scotland. I love the humor. What is everyone else reading?
Now for Snippet Sunday. This is another snippet from Magic of the Loch. Today’s snippet is continued from last week. Click here to read last weeks snippet Chapter One #5. In Chapter One Michaela meets Alan and Hyatt for the first time.
The Wild Rose Press
Kindle
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Blurb:
Michaela Grant travels to Scotland for a holiday, knowing this vacation is her last. A medical condition threatens her life and any chance of a futureโuntil she meets Alan MacLachlin, a man forced to exist between two worlds.
Alan is the legendary Loch Ness Monster. Once every fifty years he returns to human form in search of his soul mate, the one woman who can break his curse. He believes he has found forever with Michaela, but to claim it he must figure out how to save her life.
Michaela and Alan vow to take what time has to offer, but another threat looms. A sinister shape shifter with a vendetta against Alan is making Loch Ness his personal hunting ground. Now heโs threatening Michaela. Alan must discover who the shifter is and stop him before itโs too late.
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Set up for the snippet: Present day, Chapter One. The streets of Drumnadrochit were buzzing with the news of recent sightings of the Loch Ness Monster. Everyone wants to capture his or her own photo of the legendary creature.ย
Michaela was heading toward the boat tied off at the end of the pier when a German shepherd, that is chasing a cat, comes barreling toward her. Luckily for Michaela, Alan saves her from a falling into the loch. Alan and Michaela exchanged some heated words, leaving Michaela believing she doesn’t care for her rescuer. Then Hyatt (Alan’s brother) shows up to defuse the situation with humor, and to make the proper introductions (Sort of). She finds out a tidbit about Alan. He’s an Elvis fan since he’s named his bet Elvis and Priscilla. Elvis (dog) is barking at kitty teases him by parading on the ledge of the boat.
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Now for the snippet:
โElvis stop yer racket.โ Surprisingly with this one command, the dog fell silent and sat down on his haunches. Priscilla sat on the ledge preening herself, oblivious to her near death experience. โThere,โ he said turning to give Michaela his full attention. โTheyโll behave now.โ
โThatโs amazing.โ
He shrugged with indifference. โYe only have to ask.โ
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Weekend Writing Warriors for Eight Sentence Sunday
โYe only have to ask.โ
hahaha that was so funny again.
Linda,
Alan says it like it is. lol Thanks so much for stopping by. ๐
Yes Alan is really down to the Earth. No wonder she finds it amazing.
Linda,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet. ๐
Ah, but I’m hearing subtext here. “You only have to ask.” For what? From him? Hmmmm. Nice snippet.
Sharon,
So very true. lol Glad you liked the snippet!
Yeah, it helps to be a legendary lake monster when you ask!
Though I have the feeling that if I were the Loch Ness monster, my kids would still ignore me. ๐
Sarah,
re: children: Mine would ignore me, too. lol Thanks so much for stopping by for a sneak peek.
Sarah, that’s soooo funny!
I checked out the links you posted to your covers last week. You do a lovely job. Good luck with the InDโTales contest.
Jess,
Thanks so much for stopping by Judge Your Book By Its Cover, and for the good wishes! ๐
hahaha. I love it. Love the bit of humor in this. Terrific snippet.
Joanne,
Thanks so much! ๐
Congratulations on your cover for Soul Taker, Karen! And it makes sense Alan has control over smaller animals – he’s a magical creature after all. Great snippet. ๐
Siobhan,
You so got it!! ๐ Thanks about Soul Taker, too. ๐
I love that last line and all it could promise. Fab snippet.
S.J.,
Thanks for stopping in for a sneak peek. Glad you enjoyed the snippet.
This will teach me to go away for a couple weeks. Look what I missed. Elvis and Priscilla and (last week) The Hound Dog. This was my chuckle of the day. Loved it. ๐
Delynn,
Well I’m so glad you’re back!
I like how matter-of-fact he is about getting the animals to behave. He sounds like a Scottish Dog Whisperer!
Carrie-Anne,
LOL– Scottish Dog Whisperer– I like the sound of that.
Yes, animals respond to magic. Priscilla could even be his familiar.
Nice snippet.
Kate,
Yes, they do. ๐
I laugh every time I read about Elvis and Priscilla. Great snippet!
Linda,
So glad you’re enjoying the snippets!
Elvis and Priscilla, love it! I can just see the cat lording it over poor Elvis who probably got yelled at for something she started. ๐
Congrats on the cover contest.
Lyndi,
Cats are sure great at that, aren’t they? lol Thanks for the congrats about Soul Taker cover contest. There’s still one more day and I’m not that far ahead with votes. So I’m keeping my fingers and toes crossed for the best. ๐
I love that subtle humor. nice 8.
Elaine,
I’m glad you enjoyed the snippet. ๐
Great, intriguing snippet. Love the “ye only have to ask” Lovely! Thanks for posting.
Susan,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet!!
Great names for the pets there.
Stevie,
Alan would have to agree. lol
Nice animals if they do as they’re asked. I think he’s got a sway over them beyond mere politeness though.
I’m reading “A Heart on Hold” by Sara Barnard. Life keeps interrupting so I haven’t gotten far but I’m enjoying it.
Kate,
I’m aware how life interferes with reading. lol But I keep trying. ๐
Excellent snippet and I love the last line.
Kaycie,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet!!
A very enjoyable excerpt from this fascinating story! Still in love with the whole thing…
Veronica,
Thanks so much!!
Love it! Looking forward to reading this.
Thanks so much. ๐ Glad to know you’ll be back.
I so enjoy this story. It’s such a clever idea. The last line is great. A subtle hint perhaps? I’m guessing the dogs sense he’s a serpent or know. I can see why they’d listen. ๐
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Cindy,
Animals do sense more…. ๐ So glad you’re enjoying the story. ๐
Nice snippet. Love the last line-leads me to believe there is more going on between them.
Mona,
So glad you enjoyed the snippet!
You say so much with so little, it’s really inspiring!
Thanks. ๐
Dogs are more loyal and subject to obey. I wonder if Priscilla is as easily controlled. I know my cat doesn’t listen worth crap. But that’s probably why I love her. She’s independent just like me ๐ Loving these characters!
Mandy,
Thanks so much. I agree, cats are independent. Mine sure are. lol
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I wonder if he was hinting at other things when he said his last line ๐
Great snippet!
Siren,
I’m so glad you enjoyed the snippet. Hyatt can sense her fear and wants to put her at ease. (In an earlier snippet) Perhaps he’s also curious why the woman, Michaela is renting her cottage from, would send Michaela to them.